I have to think of the better title for my paper even though, my first draft was kind of rusty since I didn't read it very carefully, but at least I know how to be carefully with my writing to make sure that my paper made sense. Also, I have little rough time with the introduction and my conclusion since I know that I wasn't suppose to have all the questions in my introduction, but just one or two at the end of the paragraph that will talk about the rest of the paper. Hopefully that it will be little better than my first draft.