I got my second draft and it got little better, but I need to summary for the quotes to make it shorter than longer like my second draft. Also, I have to make sure that I can explain for the quotes for what it means and others. Also, I have to learn how to write the sentence structure for my paper since I sometimes struggle with it, but still learning how to write it in better way.

I have to think of the better title for my paper even though, my first draft was kind of rusty since I didn't read it very carefully, but at least I know how to be carefully with my writing to make sure that my paper made sense. Also, I have little rough time with the introduction and my conclusion since I know that I wasn't suppose to have all the questions in my introduction, but just one or two at the end of the paragraph that will talk about the rest of the paper. Hopefully that it will be little better than my first draft.

First Draft

Working on Draft

I'm still writing my first draft even though I'm kind of struggle with my paper because I try to get some information on Puerto Rico even though there wasn't much on it, but mostly on Spain, Cuban and how it affected their countries or people. Also, I hope that my paper will have enough of pages to focus on it since I changed with my outlines and used new two sources than the one I used before.

I already start to thinking on what to write on my research paper even though, I wasn't sure what to write on it since I need to write on more than five pages from all the 7 sources even though one or two sources wasn't all that good to me, but hopefully that I will find two new sources.

Outlines