My reflection on this class that I have lot of learning by using the sources that I need to use my words or ideas for my paper since that was little difficult for me because this paper need to be more than five pages which I haven't done that at all. Also, I hope that I can pick different topic that I can actually enjoy it, but the topic that I choose was kind of interesting that can affect the present. After-all, I did learn new things on this paper.

Final Research Paper

I finally finish editing my paper and make sure that I proofreading my paper. Also, I want my paper to have all the ideas include I add some details or ideas in my conclusion since it seems it was wrap up from what I want to say from my own word that connect with the topic in my own idea. I hope that the paper would give me good grade since I went to see two different tutors for this paper.

Today, I went to see someone else to help with my paper and everything went fine including editing my grammar. Also, I add some more ideas or details for my conclusion since I need to wrap it up than leave it hanging. So hopefully that it's much improve than all of my drafts since the tutor from writing center and other tutor said that I have good ideas for the paper and need to have some more ideas for my conclusion.

I went to writing center and the tutor said that my idea was good, but there are some fragment and some word tense that I need to fix. Also, she told me that I need to have more new idea for my conclusion since it was good, but need some more for my paper. Besides, my paper look good so far, so hopefully that I can edit it and add some more idea for my conclusion. Everything look okay so far on my paper.

I got my second draft and it got little better, but I need to summary for the quotes to make it shorter than longer like my second draft. Also, I have to make sure that I can explain for the quotes for what it means and others. Also, I have to learn how to write the sentence structure for my paper since I sometimes struggle with it, but still learning how to write it in better way.

I have to think of the better title for my paper even though, my first draft was kind of rusty since I didn't read it very carefully, but at least I know how to be carefully with my writing to make sure that my paper made sense. Also, I have little rough time with the introduction and my conclusion since I know that I wasn't suppose to have all the questions in my introduction, but just one or two at the end of the paragraph that will talk about the rest of the paper. Hopefully that it will be little better than my first draft.